It can be difficult to understand what it is like for
someone who is trying to adjust to one culture when they have lived their life
in another one. Gloria Anzaldua captures this experience completely in her
excerpt titled How to Tame a Wild tongue.
Anzaldua starts off her writing by explaining how all throughout her time of
taking classes she was trying to change herself- accent and all. She explains
that things can be so different from one place to another. The first time she
heard the word “nosotras” spoken by a Puerto Rican, it sounded unfamiliar. This
is the female version of the commonly used Spanish word “nosotros”. For
Anzaldua, this felt like she had been taken from the freedom of being a woman.
Somewhere down the line, people slowly stopped using the female version of this
word and began to group everyone into one category—male. She writes about how
complex all of the different languages are and even different versions of each
language. As she grew up, she spoke different languages with simply the
different people she would see in her everyday life. With her sister, she often
spoke what they called tex-mex; switching back and forth between Spanish and English. [a colon to further explain what
tex-mex is]. Throughout the years, Spanish has consistently changed from
dropping the beginning or end of a word to combining two words to create
something that sounds completely different. The author emphasizes how horrible
the feeling was to be talked down to for the language she spoke. Home was
somewhere that she never wanted to be ashamed of. Thinking about her favorite
movies, music, and food gave her comfort. To Anzaldua, being Mexican is a state
of soul and nothing can take that away.
In the beginning of the story, Anzaldua uses the
parenthetical dash multiple times. For example, “I remember being caught speaking Spanish at recess—that was good for
three licks on the knuckles with a sharp ruler” ( 1). In this case, she is
using it to emphasize the point of what happened is she was caught speaking Spanish.
Although this does not need to be a dash, it is made into a stronger point with
it. The author then uses both semi colons and a comma in a sentence. This
allows her to list some points while still keeping the dependent clause separated
at the end. The sentence was, “For a people who are neither Spanish not live in
a country in which Spanish is the first language; for a people who live in a
country in which English is the reigning tongue but who are not Anglo; for a
people who cannot entirely identify with either standard Spanish not standard
English, what recourse is left to them but to create their own language?”
(Anzaldua, 3).
This story is extremely strong. She, like many others, has
been mistreated for someone that is a part of her. As we looked at in class,
this is happening to so many people everywhere. I think some students will not
stick up for their language and culture out of fear. In this example,
especially at the end, the author explains very strongly how she feels about
her culture. Everyone deserves to have this kind of passion for their culture
or background but sometimes they aren’t given the chance. In my classroom, I
plan to put an emphasis on sharing each individual’s culture and making sure
everyone is proud of it. Since I will be teaching Elementary Education, this
will give them a good basis of pride to start off with while they are still
young. In my research project, I want to look deeper into how this has been affecting people throughout
history. I’m curious if it has gotten better or worse and what people are doing
to help.
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ReplyDeleteRebecca,
ReplyDeleteYou doing really good job explaining the meaning of what you have read and also applying to your own points of view. I like how you use different types of sentences to emphasize your point. You use only one of your sentences with a colon in it. It can be more sentences like that. For example, your sentences in the beginning can be joined with a colon and sound like this example - "The female version of the commonly used Spanish word "nosotros": for Anzaldua this change to the male form sounded like someone took away her freedom to be a woman." I think this makes such sentence more expressive. You might disagree, but I would like for you to play more with your sentence structures. I enjoyed reading your blog! Really god job!
Rebecca I really liked your piece. I agree where you stated how people are more likely to be ashamed of their language and culture instead of sticking up for it. I believe this happening because no one wants to be the kid that sticks out and is different so instead people try to blend in. I liked how kin the story that author does that exact opposite and actually takes pride in her culture.
ReplyDeleteHey Rebecca,
ReplyDeleteJust got done with reading your blog and you seemed to have covered your article with great detail. I personally didnt read How to Tame a Wild tongue, but having to change yourself just to fit into classroom is just not right and should not be accepted. As a teacher you have to make sure that all students feel welcome to be that class, definitaly as a elementry school teacher. Thats the foundation of very school kid in America. Awesome blog!
Hey Rebecca,
ReplyDeleteJust got done with reading your blog and you seemed to have covered your article with great detail. I personally didnt read How to Tame a Wild tongue, but having to change yourself just to fit into classroom is just not right and should not be accepted. As a teacher you have to make sure that all students feel welcome to be that class, definitaly as a elementry school teacher. Thats the foundation of very school kid in America. Awesome blog!